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    3/30/2009

    会写诗!

     

     

    前两天看lyc的日记,他提及紫藤萝与未有斋,忽然想起一段事情来,昨天同nono吹牛,这件事情越发清晰,那就是——我曾经写过诗!我以为是古诗,放章太炎那里,大概认为是今诗,而我认为的今诗,他老人家称之为白话诗~

    电脑里早没了,庆幸的是在网上搜了出来,遂又拷下来再改两个字,没敢给nono看。

    这首诗是当初为着拍一个叫朱门客的id的马屁写的,后来给未有斋看,他说:“一句一句排下来,毫无递进。”当时他语气比这个温婉许多,但依然是一盆冷水,只好前往安东处寻了点安慰。想想我真是个极记仇的人,诗都忘了,别人的批评还记得。

    这可是我死后写的唯一的一首“古”诗啊!

     

    染过浮云未有痕,擅把千金换酒樽

    晓尽弦歌耽雅意,玉壶冰里锁寸心

    沾衣方觉朱色浅,夜凉始叹门扉沉

    系得蓬舟知梦远,且行且醉且留人

     

     

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    big theorywrote:
    原来lyc同学还写日记?
    Apr. 3
    如 何wrote:
    我不跟你们俩好了:(
    Apr. 2
    0 0wrote:
    楼下改用方言念:D
    Mar. 31
    木头王wrote:
    音韵不太对阿...
    Mar. 31

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